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The Tragedy
of King Richard II
Theatre 250/376 Seminar
Fall 2008
Blank Verse and
Scansion
Nay then, god
b'wi' you an you talk in blank verse.
Jaques, As You Like It
"To
young people studying for the stage I say, with all solemnity, leave blank
verse alone until you have experienced emotion deep enough to crave for
poetic expression, at which point verse will seem an absolutely natural
and real form of speech to you. Meanwhile if any pedant with an uncultivated
heart and a theoretic ear proposes to teach you to recite, send immediately
for the police." George
Bernard Shaw as quoted in "Freeing Shakespeare's Voice" by Kristin
Linklater
Try speaking these lines:
Thou,
Nature, art my goddess — to thy law
My services are bound. (King
Lear, I, 2, Edmond)
What are the
important words?
How about these
from King Richard II — where are the stresses?
Desolate,
desolate wil I hence and die.
Banished
this fair sepulcher of our flesh.
Then
thus: I have from Le Port Blanc, a bay
In Brittaine, received intelligence
That Harry Duke of Hereford, Rainold Lord Cobham,
Bid
her send me presently a thousand pound.
More
Scansion refers to the
form, the meter or rhythm in which Shakespeare's verse is written.
Although form without content or emotion is far from Shakespeare's remarkably
powerful poetry, an understanding of his form can open important doors
to his words.
Scansion is homework, just
like dictionary work: both serve to fuly help understand the content.
Studying scansion will result
in clarity of meaning and will highlight and point to important words,
images and meanings. Scanning Shakespeare's text will provide critical
information on pronunciation. Further, discovering the intended rhythm
and, more importantly, breaks in that rhythm, will underscore the emotions
underlying the words. The rhythm of the words affects how we think, how
we feel, and how we speak. We seek an appropriate balance of form and
content.
Without proper scanning the
words and their meanings can become hopelessly muddy for the audience.
An exploration of Shakespeare's
verse suggests, at first, that it is based upon a rigid set of rules.
There are, indeed, many rules to be learned. Each rule will serve to further
unlock Shakespeare's instructions to the actor.
Shakespeare wrote the language
he heard. In order to understand what he heard and what he meant an actor
must learn to understand the clues that Shakespeare provides in his language
through various means of notation and rhetorical devices:
- When to begin speaking (picking-up
a line)
- When to go fast and when
to go slowly
- Which words are important
and which to emphasize
- When to breathe
- When to pause
- When the character is in
a state of heightened emotion
- When an -ed is
pronounced
- When a word or words are
elided
- When a word has an extended
pronunciation
This might suggest that Shakespeare
is about nothing more than learning the rules and fulfilling them. This,
however is simply not true because the one thing Shakespeare never tells
us is "why" and "how" — these questions can
only be answered by the actors' interpretation of character, motivation,
and actions, and the number of choices open to actors is, in fact, infinite.
The important thing is that the actor is not making a choice out of ignorance
or simply because one way is more comfortable.
As important as learning these
rules might be, it is equally important to understand how and why all
of these rules may be broken. Each "rule" which is broken by
Shakespeare is a signal that something is unusual. The emotional content
and meaning of a line of verse is revealed by the rhythm, both regular
and irregular. Further, the trained performer of verse has great freedom
of interpretation once the rules have been fully explored. Often, after
scanning carefully, we consciously choose to deny the "right"
way becaus the result, after 400 years, will be jarring to the ears of
the audience.
My own approach to scansion
is based upon my work through discussions and classes with RSC founders
Sir Peter Hall and John Barton, Patsy Rodenburg (voice coach for the Royal
National Theatre), Louis Scheeder (founder of the Classical Studio at
Tisch School for the Arts) and Joseph Bertram (LAMDA) who was a major
influece on Kristin Linklater.
FEELING FOLLOWS FORM
There is no single
right way to deliver a line of Shakespeare's verse.
As long as the form is honored, the actor has many, many choices of actions
and emotions. However, it must be understood that there are many decidedly
wrong ways to deliver a line.
In Shakespeare's earlier plays
(e.g.: The Comedy of Errors, King Henry VI) his blank verse tends
to be very regular. In his more mature plays (e.g.: The Tempest,
A Winter's Tale) he explores much greater freedom in breaking
the rules.
Although
we begin working on a line of verse by overstating the rhythm of stresses,
ultimately the rhythm must play underneath and be fairly lightly stated.
If this is done well, the verse can be spoken quite naturally as colloquial
speech and the full import and meaning will be preserved. Rhythm supplies
the inner drive that moves poetic language.
TOPICS
1.
Iambic Pentameter
2.
The Importance of the Line
3.
Scansion, Meter, Rhythm and Stresses
4.
"Feminine" Endings
5.
Alexandrine Lines
6.
Expansion, Contraction and Elision
7.
Packed Feet
8.
Inverted Iambs
9.
Short, Broken and Headless Lines
10.
Shared Lines
11.
End-Stopped Lines
12.
Enjambment
13.
Caesura
14.
Pauses
15.
The Monosyllabic Line
16.
Rhymes and Rhymed Couplets
Iambic
Pentameter
Blank verse was first used in England by
Henry Howard, the Earl of Surrey in his translation of the Æneid
in 1554. Surrey is known
for his sonnets which used therhyme scheme Shakespeare later used. Surrey
may have gotten the idea of using blank verse from an unrhymed Italian
verse form called versi sciolti. Earlier
English drama was written in rhyming verse, often in lines of eight beat
doggerel or lines of fourteen syllables, known as "poulters' measure"
(it sounds a bit like chickens clucking). The first English play using
blank verse was the tragedy Gorboduc by Norton and Sackville.
Blank verse first came to prominence on the stage in the work of Christopher
Marlowe.
- Shakespeare's "blank
verse" usually consists of unrhymed lines of ten syllables.
Each pair of syllables form a metric foot. An iamb is
a foot which is made up of a weak syllable followed by a stressed syllable.
- Iambic pentameter
is a line of five iambs (dee-DUM). Often, these lines are end-stopped
with a period.
I
wast- ed time, and now doth
time waste me. (King Richard
II)
de DUM, de DUM, de DUM,
de DUM, de DUM.
[I
AM I AM I AM I AM
I AM]
- Iambic pentameter suggests
a heart beat. Our hearts normally beat with a steady "lub-DUB"
rhythm (actually the sound you hear with a stethesope of first the tricuspid
and then the mitral heart valves closing). However, we all know that
our heat beat is subject to irregulariies due to both physical and emotional
stress and strain. Blank verse, though predominantly regular, becomes
irregular when the speaker is emotional.
- A
good deal of the English we normally speak consists of iambs. Most common
phrases in everyday English speech contain about five beats. Blank verse
is meant to sound natural and as near to the
natural rhythm of conversation. It best captures ordinary speech patterns.
Look at the first speech of the Nurse in Romeo
and Juliet
(I, 3) — he captures a remarkable sense of naturalistic informality
her using supposedly formal speech.
- I
think I have to
go to bed and sleep.
- I
don't re-mem-ber
what i-am-bic means.
- Shakespeare used blank verse
as the best means to capture the rhythm of everyday speech. It is meant
to be delivered with a simplicity, lightness and pace.
- Regular blank verse
means perfect iambic pentameter exactly ten syllables of five
iambs. Some of the exceptions are so common (beginning with an "inverted
iamb" or ending with an extra unstress syllable) that they are
considered essentially regular.
- An irregular line
may have fewer or more syllables than ten. An irregular line may have
breaks in rhythm (using other metrical feet or patterns). This is the
way in which Shakespeare stretched the form he inherited from Marlowe.
- The most common
irregularity in Shakespeare's verse is the use of an inverted iamb
(or a trochee - DUM-dee), often found at the head of a line
or mid-line after a caesura (see below). The trochee (the antithesis
of the iamb), creates a break in rhythm like a skipped heartbeat or
a bump in the road. It can slow the line thus giving more emphasis to
the word(s) in the trochee. The stressed-unstressed-unstressed-stressed
pattern of a regular iamb following a trochee can also create a galloping
rhythm. A trochee often signifies a new thought, a resurgence within
a thought, or conflict. “To be, or not to be (caesura)
that is the quest-ion:” If used
well, this allows you to make an acting point. Be sure that is what
Shakespeare intended. Don’t stress the first syllable simply because
it feels more natural. Always default to the iambic.
- The blank verse line is
easily comprehended and is quite concise.
- Shakespeare
uses irregular lines to catch the ear of the audience and to reveal
something about character and intentions. He stretches the form in order
to emphasize an emotional outbreak, create a sense of spontaneity, and
a dramatic tension. Irregularities in Shakespeare's verse help creater
a sense of alertness in the audience.
- In Shakespeare's hands,
the iambic line remains constant, but is always flexible.
- In a regular line of blank
verse the final word is generally stressed — indeed, it is often
the most important word in the line. This notion is at odds with our
21st century habit of falling off at the end of a thought.
Shakespeare's characters ar confident and end their lines with strength
and belief in what they are saying (as opposed the the Valley Girl's
tendency to end every thought as an upwardly inflected question). Shakespeare's
rhythmic lines move relentlessly to the final word which then serves
as a springboard to the first word of the following line.
- Each line of blank verse
ends with not necessarily a pause, but always with at least a tiny sense
break (even if there is only a comma or no punctuation at all).
Running lines together will break the structure and may destroy the
meaning and comprehension. Even worse, it might necessitate taken a
breath in an inappropriate place. The skill of actor involves finding
a successful way of marking line endings lightly. Make
certain you always are aware of the end of a verse line.
- Although Shakespeare utilized
blank verse in all of his plays, the percentage of blank verse, rhymed
verse, and prose varies from play to play. His blank verse is quite
regular in the early plays with many end-stopped lines. In
the later plays, the irregularities become far more complex. King
Richard II is written in entirely blank verse (along with King
John and King Edward III) with no prose and a significant
amount of the verse is rhymed.
- Not all stressed syllables
are necessarily equal (otherwise the line becomes overly mechanical).
Not every word that's stressed is a key word, but every key word will
receive a stress.
- One way to think of scansion
is that in a line of iambic pentameter there will likely be five stressed
syllables — this is more important than their absolute pattern
and it gives the actor a bit mor freedom to explore.
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The Importance of the Line
- The iambic pentameter line
is the basic building block of Shakespeare's verse and it needs to be
recognized, honored, and maintained. It is the structure of the line
which is important, not the individual words. We must ask ourselves
why Shakespeare took as much care to write in blank verse if he didn't
care about the form of the lines in delivery
- Unlike modern dialogue,
pauses cannot be arbitrarily taken by actors — they will interrupt
the smooth flow and vital energetic rhythm of the line.
- Unearned pauses in Shakespeare's
blank verse will destroy the meaning of the line.
- Nearly every
line of iambic pentameter is weighted near the end and one must drive
through to the final word of the line — this is the most important
word in roughly three-quarters of Shakespeare's verse lines. Unlike
our modern American English, this final word must be emphasized
(in American English we tend to drop our vocal energy at the end of
every phrase). Carry the energy through to the end of the line.
- Not surprisingly, modern
performances of the plays in which actors pause excessively have gotten
longer and longer. Even worse, by destroying the energy and impact of
Shakepeare's line, the attention of the audience is sacrificed.
- Modern editions of the plays
tend to over-punctuate — they are edited for reading, not performing.
The best text to use in the theatre should be punctuated as lightly
as possibly.
- Play the lines,
not the words.
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Scansion,
Meter, Rhythm, and Stresses
- Meter is simply
an identifiable pattern of stressed and unstressed sounds.
- A metrical foot
is a combination of stressed and unstressed sounds which make up a line
of verse.
- Scansion is the
analysis of meter.
- The rhythm of a line is
a function of the meter. The rhythm is felt on an elemental level. It
is not surprizing that the rhythm of our heartbeat is iambic!
- The following chart lists
all of the various metrical feet. All we ever really care about is
whether or not we have an iamb or not! Usually, if it isn't an iamb
it is a trochee.
- Many of Shakespeare's blank
verse lines begin with a trochee (Dum
de, which happens to be the inversion of the iamb).
Here to make
good the boist'rous late appeal (King
Richard II, I, 1)
Here
to / make good / the boist'
/ -rous late / ap-peal
DUM
de, de DUM, de DUM, de DUM,
de DUM.
- Some lines of verse (especially
in the late plays) are wildly irregular.
I know a bank
where the wild thyme blows (A Midsummer Night's Dream,
II, 1)
I-know / a bank
/ where the / wild thyme/ blows
DUM,
de de DUM, de de DUM, DUM,
DUM.
- Even the irregular lines
tend to have five accents, though they be distributed unevenly
| iamb |
de
DUM |
delay |
| trochee |
DUM
de |
season |
| spondee |
DUM
DUM |
heartburn |
| pyrrhic |
de
de |
so
so |
| dactyl |
DUM de de |
flattery |
| anapest |
de
de DUM |
seventeen |
| tribrach |
DUM
DUM DUM |
Go!
Go! Go! |
| amphibrach |
de
DUM de |
remember |
| choriamb |
DUM de de DUM |
a
trochee followed by an iamb |
- This is generally the earliest
homework an actor does with a piece of text. Scan every line
of verse you speak.
- Identify the irregular lines
(inversions, unusual number of syllables, etc.) and determine why it
might be irregular. When a line just won't scan, consider what Shakespeare's
might be implying about the emotions (doubt, unrest, etc.).
- Be sure to consider elisions,
contractions, and expansions before assuming a line is
irregular.
- When scanning, common sense
is the rule. Assume that the line is regular blank verse. Try your best
to make it scan unless it is clearly impossible or illogical to stress
those syllables.
- When scanning lines try
humming them out loud.
- Try exaggerating the iambic
rhythm by beating it out while speaking.
- A change in the regular
iambic pentameter rhythm catches the attention -- like a heart which
skips a beat. Look for words or syllables that tend to speed you up
or slow your down.
- Shakespeare always places
the stress on the important words!
- Do not allow the iambic
rhythm to overwhelm the meaning. Variations are always possible.
Additional Scansion
Notes
- Generally, pronouns are
not stressed. However, when the emphasis does fall on a pronoun it usually
for a reason and means something.
- "No," "Never,"
and "not” are rarely stressed.
- Personel pronouns are not
usually stressed (unless, perhaps, an antithetical comparison is being
made).
- "And" is rarely
stressed.
- "Cannot": generally
stress the Can-
- To "-éd"
or not to "-éd": "Blessed"
may be pronounced either "bless-ed" or "blest"
— usually the correct choice is based upon scanning the line properly.
Some editions of Shakespeare use an mark over the "e"
(é or è) when it is to be pronounced:
blessèd.
- Capitalized nouns and words
with extended spelling in the Folio are usually stressed.
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"Feminine" Endings or "Double"
Endings
- A line with an eleventh
unstressed syllable is said to have a feminine ending. As Shakespeare
matured he began using more and more lines with feminine endings. This
created a more organic feel to the language and sometimes a predominance
of them suggests a sense that the speaker is troubled.
- A feminine ending tends
to propel you to the following line. It often indicates either urgency
or stumbling and insecurity.
To
be or not to be that is
the ques-tion. (Hamlet, III,1)
or
To
be or not to be that
is the ques-tion.
You
urged me
like a
judge; but
I had
Rath-er. (King
Richard II, I, 3, 237)
- Indeed,
each of the first four lines of this famous speech has a feminine ending.
This might have something to do with Hamlet's overriding self-doubt
and his emotional state since he is contemplating suicide.
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Alexandrine Lines (Hexameters)
- A line with an twelve syllables
(six iambic feet). This is the most common form of dramitic verse written
in French — not surprisingly, the most common French phrases in
normal speech involve six beats.
The
No -bles they are
dead, the com-mons
they are cold.
(King Richard II, II,
2, 88)
- Unlike iambic pentameter,
a line of hexameter can be divided equally in half. This can result
in a heightening of emotional content, especially if it is a shared
line.
- There is a sense of cramming
too much (meaning? emotion?) into a limited space ("12 into 10").
After WWII when the House of Commons was being rebuilt, Sir Winston
Churchill had it done so that it would be too small to seat every member.
This meant that at times of crisis everyone would be very close and
there would be a charged atmosphere. An actor may need to speak fast
or in a higher emotional state using these lines.
- Unlike the iambic line,
they have a middle between two feet.
- Hexameters can have feminine
endings resulting in a 13 syllable line.
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Expansion, Contraction and Elision: Some
lines appear to be a bit messy. They seem to have too many or too few
syllables. Further, it seems impossible to apply regular iambic pentameter
to such lines. Although there are occasionally 11 or 12 syllable lines
as well as short lines, an effort must be made to seek to "fix"
such messy lines by either stretching or shrinking the pronunciation of
some words.
Elision
- When there are eleven or
more syllables and the final syllable is stressed, two interior syllables
are frequently elided or combined - an internal vowel is often
omitted or supressed (almost always the schwa which is so common
in English). Sometimes the elision is clear (e'en for even)
and sometimes the actor has to make a determination (read "best
guess").
- Contiguous vowels are often
elided also (heav-i-er becomes heav-yer, glor-i-ous
becomes glawr-yus)
To
God, the wi- dows
Cham- pyan and de-fense.
(King Richard II, I, 2, 44)
not
To
God, the wi- dows
Cham- i-on and de-fense.
or
To
God of
heav'n, King Ri-
chard, and to me;
(King
Richard II, I, 3, 40)
not
To
God of
heav en,
King Ri- chard,
and to me;
or
His
no-ble
kins-man.
Most
de-gen-rate
king!
(King
Richard II, II, 1, 262)
not
His
no-ble
kins-man.
Most
de-gen-er-rate
king!
| Over |
O'er |
| Ever |
E'er |
| Never |
Ne'er |
| Over |
O'er |
| Under
it |
Under't |
| If
it were |
If `twere |
| Even |
E'en |
| it
is |
'tis |
| virtuous |
virt'ous |
| interest |
int'rest |
| continuance |
contin'yance |
| ho-urs |
hours |
| to
it |
to't |
| the
other |
th'other |
- “Seven”
may be pronounced “sev'n”, 1 syllable — the
way we pronounce it today when counting quickly. Fire, power
and hour are other examples of words which can be pronounced
with either one or two syllables.
- People tend to speak quickly
during confrontations. The schwas, the most common sound in
English, tend to disappear.
- Elisions help to maintain
a tension between the regularity of the iambic rhythm and the more colloquial
and spontaneous.
- A “messy” line
of 12 syllables might mean a heightened emotion because too much is
being packed into a small space (“12 into 10”).
Contraction
- Just as is the case in modern
English, phrases such as you are, we are, I will,
etc. are often contracted to become you're, we're,
I'll, etc.
Well
I'll (I will)
for re-fuge
straight to
Bris-tol
Cas-tle,
( King Richard II, II,2,135)
Expansion
- Sometimes we must add a
sysllable to a word in order to preserver the meter.
- The most common form of
expansion is pronunciation of the suffix -ed
.
-
Some
modern editions differentiate these: -ed
is pronounced, while 'd is not.
-
Other
editions differentiate these: -èd
is pronounced, while -ed is not.
- Finally,
some editions do not distinguish them at all.
With
signs of
War a-bout
his ag-ed
neck. ( King Richard II, II,2,74)
- Occasionally, words with
contiguous vowels will expand. This should generally be done quite lightly
and with care to avoid sounding unnatural and often directors chose
to ignore these.
Shall
not re-greet
our
fair do-min-i-ons,
( King Richard II, I,3,142)
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Packed
Feet : Some
lines appear to be wildly messy with an extra syllable that just won't
allow it to scan. Consider the fact that two small words might be crowded
into one of the syllables of an iambic foot. In Tony Soprano's world this
might be called a ba-da-BING iambic foot.
That
thinks men
hon-est
that but
seem to be so,
( Othello, I,3,406)
That
thinks men
hon-est
that but
seem to be so,
( Othello, I,3,406)
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Inverted
Iambs : The
most common variation in meter that Shakespeare used was to begin a line
with a trochee DUM-dee (which is, of course, simply an inverted
iamb). Asways use the iambic as a default. If this interferes with sense
because of the importance of the unstressed word, consider using an inverted
iamb.
Tell
me more-o-ver,
hast thou
sound-ed him
(
King Richard II, I,1,8)
This tends to
create something of a galloping feeling that gives strength and drive
to a line: DUM-de de-DUM. Here's an example of three such lines
in a row from King Richar II (II,1,187-190):
Par-don
me,if you please; if not, I, pleased
Not to be par-doned,
am content withal.
Seek you to seize
and gripe into your hands
Inverted
iambs can also be encountered in the foot immediately following a caesura
(see below). Here's an example:
And
let thy
blows //
doub -ly
re- dou-bl-ed,
(
King Richard II, I,1,8)
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Short,
Broken, and Headless Lines
- A so-called "short
line" has fewer than ten syllables. A short line usually indicate
the need for a pause. The length of the pause is essentially the number
of missing beats. An actor might consider where in the line the pause(s)
might work best.
- A short line often implies
an actual or psychological action which fills the pause.
- An irregular line, line
a change in rhythm, is designed to catch the attention.
Believe me, noble lord,
I am a stranger here in Gloucestershire. (King
Richard II, II, 3,3-4)
- A nine syllable "headless"
line begins with a pause instead of an unstressed syllable (these are
extremely rare):
Stay!
the
king hath
thrown his
war-der down.
(King
Richard II, I, 3,118)
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Shared
Lines
- Two or more lines add up
to a single line of iambic pentameter. When this is done the lines are
to be said together quickly and without pauses. The second actor must
come in exactly on cue.
KING: And Norfolk, throw down
his.
GAUNT:
When, Harry, when? (King
Richard II, I, 1,162)
- Together,
these three lines add up to one perfectly scanned line of iambic pentameter.
They must work together in tempo, pace, rhythm and energy to form a
single seamless line. The spacing of the lines on the page is always
a clue.
- The
actor must learn to give and receive half lines so that the full line
is preserved.
- The
pause might simply be a pause, or an action might be implied.
King John: Death.
(broken line)
Hubert:
My lord?
King John: A
grave.
Hubert: He
shall not live.
King John: Enough.
(KJ)
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End-Stopped
Lines
- An End-stopped
line is one which completes a complete thought and ends with a period
or full stop.
- In the early plays the blank
verse is very regular and there are many end-stopped lines.
- In reality, it is best to
avoid full-blown pauses at the end of any line. It is best to think
of it as a slight hesitation, an opportunity to take a breath, and an
invitation to go on to the next line.
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Enjambment
- This is a line which runs
on to the middle of the next line where the thought ends with a semi-colon
or period.
- These appear with greater
frequency in the later plays. They are rare in Henry VI and
very common in Othello, Tempest, and The Winter’s
Tale.
- Common practice has been
to ignore the enjambments in order to complete a thought. This was believed
to be more naturalistic. Some actors play with the idea of not
ignoring enjambments. The result of a slight pause at the end of the
enjambed line is to create the effect that you don’t know what
you’re going to say until you say it. This might be even more
naturalistic because this is how we speak. Our thoughts shift in mid-sentence.
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Caesura
There
lives and
dies, /
true to
King
Ric- chard's throne,
( King Richard II, I,3,86)
- This is a slight break in
the middle of a line, often, but not always indicated by a punctuation
mark, usually a semi-colon, question mark or period. A caesura follows
an enjambment.
- The caesura indicates a
sense-break or the end of a thought and may carry maximum meaning.
- A caesura suggests that
a thought or an emotion is fragmented. Often the two parts that make
up the line on either side of the stop are generally emotionally quite
rich.
- A thought which starts in
the middle of a line interrupts the flow of energy. It suggests a change
of pace or tone for some reason.
- Although a caesura indicates
a pause, the length of the pause must be controlled so that the sense
and drive of the line is not lost.
- Although it is sometimes
an actual pause, or breathing space, it is generally more like an inspiration
- a new thought. It is a break made audible, but not necessarily an
audible pause. (Caesarian section: “Macduff was from his mother’s
womb/Untimely ripp’d” – Caesura derives from
a Latin word meaning ‘cut or slice’).
- One way of dealing with
caesura is to begin speaking the second half of the line (after the
full-stop) as if you don't want to be interrupted. This might imply
a sharp intake of breath.
- A caesura almost always
occurs after the sixth beat, sometimes after the fourth, and rarely
after the second.
- Many lines, though not everyone,
have caesurae.
- Sometimes the pause can
best work if the tempo of the first part of the line (preceeding the
caesura) is relatively slow.
- A 'masculine caesura' occurs
after a stressed syllable, and a 'feminine caesura' occurs after an
unstressed syllable.
- Epic Caesura:
In later plays more than earlier ones, this is more common and is, indeed,
a pause, usually in an eleven syllable line. Something big is happening
- certainly a new thought. Effective scanning through experience is
the ultimate determiner.
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Pauses
- Pauses are generally indicated
by punctuation. A full-stop (period) or semi-colon suggests the end
of a thought and it potentially marks a pause.
- Locate all pauses in a speech.
- When a pause clearly exists,
determine why it is there. Does it end a thought?
- Avoid pausing in the middle
of a line. A caesura indicates a sense-break, not a full-blown pause.
- Half-lines or short lines
suggest a pause. The length should approximate the missing feet. The
placement of the pause must be thought out. Should it come before or
after the partial line?
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The
Monosyllabic Line
- About a quarter of Shakespeare's
lines seem to be made up of words of a single syllable.
- Generally, monosyllabic
lines indicate a certain weight and should be spoken at a slower pace.
- Seek
out all of the monosyllabic lines in a speech and determine why it might
want to be slower and more measured. try saying the line quickly. Is
it still comprehensible?
- Occasionally a monosyllabic
line might suggest giving each syllable equal stress.
- Honor the line and do not
add additional pauses internally.
Too
good to be so, and too bad to live, (King
Richard II, I, 1,40)
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Rhymes
and Rhymed Couplets
- When Shakespeare uses rhymes
they should be recognized and celebrated, not hidden. Rhymes can produce
a sense of expectation and anticipation in the audience. they also are
a form of wit and should be celebrated as such. Work to findout why
the character needs to use rhyme at this moment.
- A number of plays (particularly
the earlier ones) contain a good deal of rhymed verse (Love's Labor's
Lost)
- When two consecutive lines
rhyme at the end of a speech it is referred to as a rhyming
couplet. All sonnets end with a couplet.
- Couplets are often found
at the end of a scene (indeed, Shakespeare used this technique to signal
to his audience that a scene had ended and another was to begin). A
rhymed couplet might serve to provoke a laugh or, conversely, it might
be quite chilling. Sometimes the couplet leads the audience into the
next scene.
- In order to unlock the sense
of a rhymed line, try stressing the penultimate word in the line.
March sadly after. Grace
my mournings here
In weeping after this untimely bier. (King
Richard II, V, 6,51-52)
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Some General Notes:
- A standard line of iambic
pentameter is ten syllables long and ends with a stressed, or masculine
syllable.
- A feminine line has
eleven syllables and the final one is weakened.
- An Alexandrine has
twelve syllables and might create a sense of trying to squeeze more
into the line
- Look for possible elisions
to make the verse work (heavn, Jul-yet, ravn).
- A line that is shorter than
ten syllables suggests that there is a pause — it may be at the
end of the line, before it, or in the middle of it somewhere. Try different
readings .
- Initially, rely on common
sense to identify the strong stresses in a line — what are the
important words? Words with long vowel sounds and diphthongs are generally
stressed.
- Beyond scasion, identify
the key words in each line -- they will certainly be stressed,
and they may ultimately be the only stresses in the line (while there
are generally five stressed syllables per line, there may only be one
or two key stresses.
- Ascending iambic line –
it is as if you are stepping up a flight of stairs to arrive at the
top. Pitch or emphasis gets a bit higher with consecutive each iamb,
ending with the final stress which is often the most important word
of the line.
Choice
In Shakespeare's language,
some words are selected and receive extra choice. They
are the primary words in a line or in a sense unit.
This does not necessarily mean
that they are said louder than other words. It simply means that the are
a bit more important and are subtly emphasized in one way or another (volume,
pitch, tone, rhythm, pause, etc.).
The beauty of Shakespeare's
use of scansion is that he always makes certain that the words which should
receive choice because of their importance always fall on a stressed syllable.
Rarely would such words as
the or of be stressed and, in general, Shakespeare does
not stress personal pronouns (this is hard for folks in our "me"
generation to understand).
The
hierarchy of parts of speech goes as follows:
| VERBS |
In general,
are the most important words since they invoke ACTION. The one exception
would be the verb TO BE (am, is, are, was,
were, will be, going to be, etc.) which merely describes a
state of being rather than an action. One should also avoid stressing
do, have, would, could or should when they modify
a primary verb (as in: I would have gone. Gone is the only
important verb here.). |
| NOUNS |
(persons,
places, things) would follow in importance. The verbs act upon the
nouns. |
| ADVERBS |
modify
verbs, adjectives, other adverbs, clauses, and sentences. Adverbs
answer such questions as how?, when?, where?, in what way?, or how
often? Often created with the suffix -ly. |
| ADJECTIVES |
modify
a noun, usually describing it or making its meaning more specific. |
| PREPOSITIONS |
a word
or set of words used in close connection with, and usually before
nouns and pronouns to show their to some other part of the clause
(words like of, with, above, below, from, in, through, out of,
as, etc.) |
| CONJUNCTIONS |
connects
two words, phrases, or clauses together. and, or, nor, but, so,
etc.) |
| PRONOUNS |
a word
used as a substitute for a noun or noun equivalent (him, her,
she, he, they, I, me, we, etc.) |
| INTERJECTIONS |
sometimes
called a filled pause, part of speech that usually has no grammatical
connection to the rest of the sentence and simply expresses emotion
on the part of the speaker (O, wow, blimey, hah, alas, 'sblood,
damn, etc.) |
| NEGATIVES |
word
or particle or term or phrase (as not, no, never) that
expresses negation or denial |
Concentrate on the VERBS (most emphasis) and NOUNS
(less emphasis) and let the descriptive adjectives and adverbs take care
of themselves.
Notice how far down the heirarchy
pronouns are. That is often difficult for 21st century actors to fathom.
"I" "me" "us" and "you" are rarely
stressed in Shakespeare.
Shakespeare often ends each
line with the most important word in the line - it certainly needs to
receive extra choice (avoiding the American habit of dropping off at the
end of each sentence). Be very carefully with multisyllable words which
end lines. Don't merely stress the first syllable and allow the final
stress to drop off (as in dignity).
In the Folio and Quartos, words
with extended spellings and non-proper nouns which are capitalized tend
to be important.
Conversely, certain words should
usually not be stressed: pronouns, negatives (not, no, none, etc.), prepositions
and connectives (but, and, if, of, etc.)
When stressing a preposition,
connective, adjective or adverb seems critical for meaning and clarity,
the above guidelines should be ignored. It is important to remain flexible.
Scansion and decisions about extra choice are not exact sciences and rules
are made to be broken every now and then.
Shakespeare takes great care
to insure that important words will be stressed when properly scanned.
Other words which receive extra
choice are identified by locating alliteration, assonance and antitheses.
The word NOW
is usually an important one and needs to be stressed. This is also true
for a number of other words such as ALL, BUT, THEREFORE,SINCE
and YET.
The word "O"
is an interjection. An interjection is a word added to a sentence to convey
emotion. It is not grammatically related to any other part of the sentence.This
single vowel is full of emotion and should always be celebrated,
never swallowed.
©
Lary Opitz 2008
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