After you
have thoroughly read your partner's paper, use the following questions as a
guideline for composing a critique letter to the writer about his/her draft.
Your critique letter should be written directly and personally to the writer
(not to me) and should offer an informed, intelligent reader response to the
draft. Your aim in not merely to point out weaknesses in the draft, but more
importantly, to respond to the critical reading of the text by explaining the
strengths of the paper and offering concrete recommendations for how the writer
can improve upon the draft, giving it greater clarity of ideas, depth and
insight, and readability of the prose.
Your critique
letter should be approximately two typed pages. You are to submit it to your partner by Wednesday, 23
February. When you hand in your
final version of the paper, include the original draft and the critique letter
you received.
- How does this draft respond to the
chosen paper topic?
- What is the thesis? How does the writer support or
defend this thesis? How, if at all, could the thesis be modified to
strengthen the paper?
- How attentive and insightful is the
writerąs reading of his/her chosen text? What did the analysis reveal to you about the text that
you hadnąt considered or been aware of? Explain.
- Do you agree (or disagree) with the
writerąs interpretation of the selected Evolving Canon 1 texts? Why or why not? Does the other use
sufficient textual evidence to support her/his thesis? Does the author demonstrate
careful and insightful close reading of the text?
- What did you like best about this
paper? Why?
- What did you like least about this
paper? Why?
- What suggestions do you have for the
writer in terms of the writing
of this paper?
- Directly on the text, make any
corrections in grammar, punctuation, or spelling.